story

LI:To use correct tenses in my writing.
This week for writing we had to make a short story and we have to have all of the nine tenses that we leanrt over the weeks.My story is about a goblin who stool a crown and was in deep trouble but the goblin king atacked with the army.

link to my story 

Tense video

LI:to identify tense verbs
LI:to identidy tense words that are continuous present,past or future.
This week for writing we had to make a google slides and we had to get into partner of two and we had to chose wich one of continuous present,past or future and if you choose continuous present and your word is kick you have to write is kicking and if you choose past and you choose kick you write kicked and finally if you choose future and your work was kick you have to write will kick.

Writing

LI:To evaluate writing somples using the PBS Nubric.
We had to write a story about family time and for writing we were learning how to check our own work if it has good imformation or alot imformation and does it or don't have punctuation or not.

no work story

LI:TO write a narrative with dialogue.


For writing we looked at a no talking story and we had to make up what they are saying before we start we hd to make a planner of the five w's.

text remminder

writng

LI: to write a descriptive scene.

For writing we did show and tell in the show we had to make up a story of them and show what happened and in the tell what happened.

Writing

LI:To identify the structure and language features of a narrative.

paragraphs

LI:Is to write detailed paragraphs.

eathworms

LI:Is to write a 18 sentence explanation

Zombies

LI:My writing group went outside and played a game called Zombies.

On monday afternoon we went behing LS1 and played games of zombie each team had a turn to be zombies.

duffy assembley

LI:Today our guests was Matt Johnson and Tayla Hodson Tomokino

Today I learned about Talya was a BMX racer she started racing when she was 6 years old she started because she saw her mum on the news paper so she started being a BMX racer too and Matt plays rugby league for the Blues I also learned that talya is a accountant,interview and commentator and in the future plans for Matt is being a PE teacher to be a PE teacher he needs to read how to train the kids and the rules of the sport and taylas one is being a lawyer. Today I learned by Listening to Matt and Tayla and listening to read and become a star.

figurative language

LI:Today I learned about figurative language. If you want to make a figurative story you must rember and have to use these in your story alleteration,personification,idiom,simile and metaphor.

Little boat recount

Little boat recount

I was floating in the lake it was a nice warm day but suddenly a big storm came and almost hit me it was a big one I was scared I thought I was going to die but I was fine and finally it stopped  After that some army’s were spying on my and they blowed me I was alive my sale just ripped I was keep on going but then towards a squirrel and then another squirrel but both of them falled of and died and then there were some mean birds who pooped on me and at the end all of them was in front of me I wasn’t scared so I went to the captain and the captain understanded that I was good so the birds founds some wool and made another sale.

little boat

Eat My lunch

Coco

Coco is her name

she can get fame.

If she work in Bollywood

In my neighbourhood

Coco is her name

She runs  fast just for a game.

Her fur is brown

Like a silly clown.

Wow her teeth

is like beef.

Don’t mess with her

She will might share her fur.

Athletics day

The important things

Lightning

The important thing about lightning is that is comes from the sky. Lightning roars like a lion.It crushes buildings and kills people.Lightning is electricity.But the important thing about lightning is that  it comes from the sky.

Plants

The important thing about plants is that they grow in the ground.Plants give humans oxygen and humans give them carbon dioxide.Plants can be any color.But the important thing about plants is they grow in the ground.

                                         

Books

The important thing about books is that you learn new stuff.Books make you smart and sometimes books are interesting and some are boring but the importing thing about a book is that you learn new stuff.

Family

The important thing about your family is that they help you do something.Sometimes you can get angry at one of your family members but if you just calm down you can be together again but the important thing about your family is that they help you to do something.

     

Box

The important thing about a box is that it can be any size.Boxes have four corners and it is made from cardboard they can be shut or close.You can move furnitures in boxes or even use them for work.But the important thing about a box is that it can be any size.

Today I was learning to write short poems about important things.

Draft

L.I I am learning to use the F(fix) and A(add) part of DRAFT.

The paragraphs below have punctuation mistakes. Find the mistakes and fix them.

Also see if you can add an adjective in front of a noun.

I saw a  dog standing outside the front gate of my new house. It was looking lost and tired so I gave her some food and water. After that I took it for a walk and run in the big park. At  6 ‘0 clock a men   knocked on the door and it was the dogs owner. The man said that he was looking for his lost dog. The dog’s was glad to see its owner and they both walked home.I love    cute animals so I will ask my mum and dad to buy me a puppy that I can take care of.

1.  Lorenzo will go to the interschools.

2.   Mrs Prasad is a nice teacher.

3. David’s dog got lost.

4. Why do I have to sleep?

5. “I want to go to the pools!”

THing I can recycle at home

Things I can recycle at  home.

• I can recycle plastic. 
• I can recycle paper I can recycle glass bottles.
• I can recycle boxes.
• I can recycle cans.

Conversation

       Dad and son conversation

“What are you doing Alisha?”

“Playing with my toys”

“Ok, but put them away after you finished playing with them.”

“Ok”I say in a very quiet voice.